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Post by Link on Jan 23, 2006 19:19:17 GMT -5
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Drawing wasn't scanned. A digital camera was used.
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Post by Mephistopheles on Jan 24, 2006 17:32:12 GMT -5
Very good drawing, now just draw a background to justify that is a "School Girl", I don't see any school or anything that indicates such.
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Post by Gamemaniac on Jan 28, 2006 19:59:45 GMT -5
Bad things: 1) You used a camera not a scanner. 2) The back part of the hair isn't well defined. 3) The left arm is missing a chunk or is curved abnormally. Good things: 1) Once again I like the style. 2) The face is beautiful. 3) Specially the eyes (Had to point this apart XD). 4) I like the contrast used through the uniform. 5) Anatomy is almost perfect. 6) A more natural feeling. Overall: I like it ... I'll give you a 4.5 rounded to 4 XD ... The day I give you a 5 is cause it really is perfect XD (IMO). Suggestions: Once again try to use a scanner. Practice a little bit the anatomy for the arms. Remember .... this is only my opinion XD I could be wrong. Mephistopheles: The girl is using a school uniform. That is why it is called school girl. ¬¬
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Post by Mephistopheles on Jan 28, 2006 20:37:15 GMT -5
How could I knew it was a school uniform?
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Post by Gamemaniac on Jan 28, 2006 21:32:48 GMT -5
Well ... School uniforms have similar features in anime .... look at the neck and the sleeves ...
I guess you haven't seen much anime .... or Japanese uniforms XD
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Post by LoRd★YaKoV on Jan 28, 2006 21:35:28 GMT -5
How could I knew it was a school uniform? duhhhh come on jus look at it , cant be that hard
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Post by Mephistopheles on Jan 28, 2006 21:50:35 GMT -5
It looks almost plain black.......... so nope, clothes are clothes for me.
I would go for gamemaniac's second choice, not seeing a lot of japanese uniforms.
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Post by Gamemaniac on Jan 28, 2006 21:57:06 GMT -5
Not that you are interested ... but the uniform of this school girl is similar to that of Sakura Card Captor ....
So if you had seen Sakura in her uniform you should at least suspect ...
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Post by Mephistopheles on Jan 28, 2006 23:59:45 GMT -5
I reserve my comment in that matter. Now go back to grading the drawing.
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Post by tsukasa on Jan 30, 2006 21:08:15 GMT -5
The drawing is really cool, however, the school uniform looks like if it is from the material that the raincoats are made. I don' t know why but I think so. Now, invent the name for the girl's school XD.
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Post by Fuu Henjin on Jan 31, 2006 0:21:30 GMT -5
Hello!... well... here we go...
The style of your drawing is good but not the enough, I'm agree with Gamemaniac...
1) You used a camera not a scanner. 2) The back part of the hair isn't well defined. 3) The left arm is missing a chunk or is curved abnormally Also... 4)You can change the position of the nose... is well located but the profile face does not fix. 5)The neck in the left side is something like broke?... it is because the anatomy of the shoulders... but you can fixed it... is not to dificult... ^^ 6)The hair style... what type is?... o.0? 7)The superior part of the front face is bigger in the left side than in the right side... don't worry to much about.. but take care...
The drawing is pretty well done I like it so much... and also there are a few persons that can draw like you draw... the shadows and lights are great! 2)The hands are pretty well done... 3)The eyes express the feelings of the draw (I really appreciate that) 4)The clothes are original and are perfect for her. 5)I love the detail of the bag! 6)The face is almost perfect... (I'm jelaous... I wanna be her ¬¬) 7)I really impressed with your shadows and lines... you seem pretty sure of what are you doing...
In fact: You have a great future like a drawer... just try more ^^
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Post by Sakura on Feb 15, 2006 20:00:49 GMT -5
I gave you a 5 cuzz for me its a very good drawing, really its great, in my opinion you have a lot of talent!!!!..... keep going.....
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Post by LoRd★YaKoV on Feb 21, 2006 10:58:08 GMT -5
yeperrssssssss yaayyyyy you have my selfsteem raise in a 14.5674% thank you very much
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