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Post by Link on Jan 23, 2006 19:17:50 GMT -5
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Drawing wasn't scanned. A digital camera was used.
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Iron Man
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Post by Iron Man on Jan 24, 2006 9:57:16 GMT -5
Why does the ball seems to be not a ball and looks like a dish, never the less, the drawing is perfect, IMO. Well, the fingers aren't perfect but they are nice for a noob (j/k).
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Post by tsukasa on Jan 24, 2006 10:03:48 GMT -5
Although the drawing is not perfect, the fingers are strange, the reason of having the fingers like that is that she broke the arm, also, the drawing is not so llamative and she swelled the fingers
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LoRd★YaKoV
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Post by LoRd★YaKoV on Jan 24, 2006 14:03:43 GMT -5
Why does the ball seems to be not a ball and looks like a dish, never the less, the drawing is perfect, IMO. Well, the fingers aren't perfect but they are nice for a noob (j/k). yeahhhh noob ha,ha,ha if u think so |
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Post by Mephistopheles on Jan 24, 2006 17:29:26 GMT -5
LOL, you're not a noob, anyway, let's implement my patented super-killing criticism.
Yeah, the ball is not a correct circle, if I were a drawing teacher you would get a low one for that.
The arm/elbow is not necesarilly wrong, nevertheless, a very awkward and not likely position.
The hand seems to enlarge a bit to be able to handle the ball in physical space, so it looks weird.
The hand in the head is being semi-blocked by her hair, you cheater.
The rest is pretty nice, a 3.
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LoRd★YaKoV
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Post by LoRd★YaKoV on Jan 24, 2006 18:03:15 GMT -5
L L cant you just stay quiet, but as i said you are the graders
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Post by Gamemaniac on Jan 28, 2006 19:42:31 GMT -5
OK ... I don't mean to be rude ....
Bad things:
1) The ball is not spheric.
2) The arm is bend unnaturally.
3) The hand is deformed and the fingers seem broken.
4) The breast seems not well aligned.
5) The left arm seems somewhat deformed.
Good things:
1) The style is interesting.
2) The face is decent.
3) Shadows are fine.
4) Except for the arms and the breast .. the rest of the body seems fine.
Over all I'll give it a 3.5 ... rounded to 3 XP
Next time try to use a scanner it would be better for your drawings.
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Post by Mephistopheles on Jan 28, 2006 20:38:22 GMT -5
You and your scanners...... although it is better a scanner, the drawing is still the same.
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LoRd★YaKoV
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Post by LoRd★YaKoV on Jan 28, 2006 21:43:16 GMT -5
OK ... I don't mean to be rude .... . youre being rude :@ |
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Post by Mephistopheles on Jan 28, 2006 21:46:23 GMT -5
LOL, come on, he's the first guy to point out the good parts.
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Post by Gamemaniac on Jan 28, 2006 21:50:59 GMT -5
LoRd★YaKoV: I told you ... I don't mean to be rude I just gave you my opinion.... Mephistopheles: What I meant by "use a scanner" is that it would look better for us to judge...
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Post by Fuu Henjin on Jan 31, 2006 0:53:39 GMT -5
well here we go... again... but now... I will start by the positive things...
1)Is a nice draw and the girl is cute... ^^
2)I like the flow of the clothes
3)The shadows are well located and not to strong
4)The expression of the face is fine for the draw...
Now... I will try not to be so rude...
First: Anatomy...
1) Right arm is broken... I don't know... but I think she has serious problems...
2) Left arm is shorter than the right arm
3) The shoulders are very narrow
4) The waist disappears between the blouse and the short
5) The neck is too short
6) The top frontal part of the hair is slightly pronounced
7) The right ear must go a bit more up and inward
8) The eyelid between the eyebrow and the right eye is too much spread ... try to give it less pronunciation
Now... the rest:
1) The clothes work well ... but take care that it does not come loose so much .. otherwise the figure of the drawing will get lost
2) Yes ... it is true ... the ball is not perfect ... but ... it has arrangement... isn't it? ... just take care that does not happen again...
3) The hair could be more defined... but is ok...
4) The eyes are losing the essence... they does not show me who is she... she seem lost... but well I can have all... can I?
5) The shape of the body is losing projection because the clothes are too free... but is ok...
6) The shape of the body has the idea but you keep it wrong... work on that....
7) The hair is not defined... take care that the hair is short... so it has to have more hair very well delined... ok...
Well I try... but it seem does not work T_T...
Resume: I know you can do it better than this.. ^^
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Post by Sakura on Feb 15, 2006 20:06:44 GMT -5
Great dra.. Great shadowsss.....Great!!!!!!!!!!
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