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Girl #1
Dec 18, 2005 23:30:43 GMT -5
Post by Link on Dec 18, 2005 23:30:43 GMT -5
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Drawing wasn't scanned. A digital camera was used.
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Girl #1
Dec 19, 2005 1:52:48 GMT -5
Post by Mephistopheles on Dec 19, 2005 1:52:48 GMT -5
Not bad, quite good actually.
I'll give it a 4, although it's well drawn it's still a simple drawing, not anything elaboratedly hard.
(Man I'm so mean and I suck at drawing LOL)
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Girl #1
Dec 19, 2005 2:22:00 GMT -5
Post by Gamemaniac on Dec 19, 2005 2:22:00 GMT -5
It is a great drawing and the way it was transfer to pc dosen't make justice to the artwork. I'll give it a 4 though because it's not a full body drawing.
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LoRd★YaKoV
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[x=lordyakov][M:194]
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Girl #1
Jan 23, 2006 19:09:01 GMT -5
Post by LoRd★YaKoV on Jan 23, 2006 19:09:01 GMT -5
hey thats not fair ~~ well you are the graders
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Girl #1
Jan 31, 2006 22:41:12 GMT -5
Post by Fuu Henjin on Jan 31, 2006 22:41:12 GMT -5
Hey! I'm here again!... ^^ and I will start XDDD
Bad things: 1) The shoulders aren't aligned... well they are... but the right is a Little below the left. 2) The nose is not in the right place... why?... Try to turn the face and you will notice that the profile doesn't fix. 3) The superior part of the head is too big... so like a consequence the front of the upper part of the face is too long... 4) The neck looks like if it was collocated by a machine... first the body and then the head... 5) The hair style is wrong... one side is longer that the other... and the ribbon is wrong too... it has to be more inclined to the ears. 6) The line of the drawing are dirty... try to keep just one line and no to many...
Good things:
1 The girl is really cute 2) The eyes are very well done 3) The outfit is original (extra point ;p) 4) The expression in her face is really amazing... I like it...is not cheerful like all the girls... 5) The shadows and lights are well applied... but try to blur it just a little more...
Well... I think is all... personally I think is a good job... this and the school girl... you are a great drawer... just need to improve in the way you draw the body ... OK! ^^
Take care... and remember the practice made the master.. (I think is something like that... -.-u)
Oh! I almost forgot to give you the grades... here are:
Girl 1: 3.5 Atlanta girl: 3... well it was 2.7 School Girl: 3.8=4
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Girl #1
Jan 31, 2006 23:21:03 GMT -5
Post by Mephistopheles on Jan 31, 2006 23:21:03 GMT -5
Where do you take anime anatomy classes? it could be useful for when grading drawings.
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Girl #1
Jan 31, 2006 23:56:11 GMT -5
Post by Fuu Henjin on Jan 31, 2006 23:56:11 GMT -5
Jajajaja!... Well I don't take any class for draw... XD... but I learned by myself... but If you want to know more... there are many books of how to draw and all those stuff like that... but really I just learned by experience... ^^... Now if you want some advices... I can help you... ;p
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LoRd★YaKoV
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[x=lordyakov][M:194]
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Girl #1
Feb 1, 2006 15:44:12 GMT -5
Post by LoRd★YaKoV on Feb 1, 2006 15:44:12 GMT -5
hi thanks for being careing haha but i say the same haha, my drawing skills are also just by practice and no more, so if you need help ill be there
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Girl #1
Feb 1, 2006 17:58:59 GMT -5
Post by Fuu Henjin on Feb 1, 2006 17:58:59 GMT -5
Yay! I hope soon I can upload some of my draws... ^^... and I'll be waiting for yor reviews... now I know we are more or less at the same level... XD
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Post by Gamemaniac on Feb 2, 2006 0:12:11 GMT -5
Where do you take anime anatomy classes? it could be useful for when grading drawings. There is no better teacher than Nature itself ... Just take a look around and imagine the draw as part of reality... Does it fits? if not then something is wrong. Another way is to compare it to other works...but maybe the work you use as reference could be wrong to... so I would recomend the first one ... PS This is offtopic so lets leave it as it is ... if you want to talk about it ... then make athread about drawing on general board.
When I first review this drawing I just didn't see all that stuff Fuu mention. I guess I was not as hard grading this ones as I was with others XD...
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Girl #1
Feb 15, 2006 20:04:09 GMT -5
Post by Sakura on Feb 15, 2006 20:04:09 GMT -5
This one is great also, but I think the others are muchh betterrrr!!!!! I like the way you draw!!!!!
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